Music, the ancient language...
Group: Musicians
Posts: 407
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Posted: May 30 2003, 06:09 |
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The sound of that glocky instrument - forgive me I don't know the name - really left a great first impression! I like that sound, I really do. You should make another track with this instrument playing the main theme or something.
The harmonics are well chosen, I think. But I think there is room for developping your melody. It's cool on it's own, but I think it would be cooler if more stuff around would be happening, not to much, just a little. Anyway, that's more a matter of taste.
What I strongly advise you to do though, is a better ending! No really, this track deserves a better ending than just a seven time repeat of a doubled melody, plus a fade out. Please make a better ending! It's really unsatisfying like this.
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