Moz
Group: Musicians
Posts: 600
Joined: July 2005 |
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Posted: July 02 2005, 10:34 |
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OK, I've got very mixed feelings about this track.
- The piano is great.
- I quite like the strings, but they don't vary enough.
- Not sure about the "flutter" percussion at 0:23 / 0:48 (I don't know the right word for it). It sounds a bit odd.
- The bass at 1:10 onwards is good, better at 1:23, but sounds a bit wrong at 1:27. I don't know why.
- Drums at 3:20 are good.
- There's some percussion at 3:28 to 3:36 that doesn't sound right. It carries on until 4:10 when it fades out, and back in again at 4:18.
The main problem for me is that it never really gets going - sounds more like a semi-ambient mix than a breakbeat mix. (Have you ever heard "Symphony" by Hybrid? that's how I'd expect a breakbeat mix to sound...)
By the way, I'm a big trance fan and I love breakbeat mixes, so this is my kind of music...
Hope my honesty isn't too harsh - I think this needs some tweaking, particularly the percussion.
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