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Posted: July 06 2004, 03:47
This is my first Oldfield song, I mainly did it to experiment with eqs and structure. The beginning is alot like Tubular Bells but I have tried to give it my own feel.

Hope you like it thanks to Jammer and c_haese for suggesting place and format to host songs.

Please comment, the more negative you are now the better the future songs (gulp) will be,

thanks,

Fourth Age.

Cylindrical

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Posted: July 14 2004, 06:22
Sounds great
Good eq seperation
Try to place bass in the middle of the stereo pan
and I'd go easier on the reverb. way esier.
I love the C part :)
great ending. (exposedish)
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Posted: July 14 2004, 10:09
I like it very much, even the reverb. :) However, the end is loud a little IMHO - compared to the part before it.

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Posted: July 19 2004, 10:31
Enjoy cylindrical.  Faithful to the MO feel but it is original.  I like it's advance, some tracks posted here never go anywhere.  I'm not sure about the 1:36 deviation but it is true MO style - okay I like it.  Has that sense of fun and adventure that MO does well.  It has a nice progression.  
The end : Well that is MO.  I think it kinda takes away from the piece because it's such a relacing piece only to get woken up at the end.  But here I don't like MO much when he strikes a beautiful piece only to stamp of like a thwarted lover in some other mad direction.  This is close to a commercial track.   Well done.
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Posted: July 21 2004, 03:46
Thanks for all your comments, the endings just temprorary Im hoping to add some more to the ending to make it into a long(er) instrumental. So that should up in a few days.

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