Korgscrew
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Posted: Mar. 16 2005, 17:20 |
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It's the portamento that's I think what's causing that. Shifting it forwards by perhaps 20ms or so should do the trick.
I like this one generally, though. I don't find it any more repetitive than the original version. In fact, I feel that additions like the resonant synth parts give it more movement. I love the bass sound and the pattern it plays, though I'd prefer to hear it change to follow the chord progression - I think it would help to bring everything together a little more, with the bass part really supporting the others. It combines nicely with the percussion parts though, I think the whole thing has a nice 'slam' to it (to use a highly technical term ). I don't personally mind the fact that the bass line doesn't continue the whole way through - I like that, actually!
The loud chord stabs don't quite work for me though - I think I'd have put them on the first beat of each bar...conventional perhaps, but that's my feeling! They sound a bit accidental as they are, possibly also partly because they're fairly high in the mix.
Nice one nevertheless!
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