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Posted: Nov. 27 2008, 11:28

Hi, it's been a little while since i've posted anything on here. Basically i've recorded a tune in the style of classical, at the moment it is called "untitled until further notice" as my imagination has failed me and i can't think of a suitable name. It was inspired by music of the spheres and I'd like to let you all here it.

Here is the address : - http://www.myspace.com/markmonaghan  

Any opinions/criticism would be welcome =]
Mark


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Posted: Nov. 29 2008, 09:22

There where a lots of references to Hergest Ridge :P (Or at least that's what I thought).
Still I liked the concept, very good for a first composition.
But I think that there where parts where you could improve the sound, because there where parts that it sounded almost empty (like if that part was intended to sound a little more strong).
Also the first time the trumpet entered trowards the end of the song sounded a little odd.

But still, good work
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Posted: Nov. 29 2008, 19:01

I liked the first couple of minutes but I thought it needed to do a bit more after that. Just my view, not necessarily accurate.  ;)

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Posted: Nov. 29 2008, 21:41

I like it. The Ommadawn cover was great. I added you to my freinds list........I only got on myspace recently. I have one freind so far, Mike Oldfield, I need more freinds boo hoo.....

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Posted: Nov. 30 2008, 07:24

Thanks very much everyone :) I'm now considering going back and changing things, so thanks for listening and thanks for the advice  :)

Mark


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