Yann Kovic
Group: Members
Posts: 41
Joined: Dec. 2009 |
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Posted: April 23 2010, 15:09 |
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Hello Mike,
I've listen to your opus once again, and here is my opinion.
First movement:
Guitar is too agressive. Nice structure with a lot of variation of tonalities. But...
Second movement:
Brass section sounds very poor.
Third movement: Too long, no enough tonality variations. And...
Forth movement: if the rythm is very nice, where is the melody?
General: You've always very good rythmic structures, but A little bit too short each time, and never developped. It's like if you had something to say, but you never finished your setences...
If rythms are good, they seem to be too mutch in major tonality. Listen Mike playing: some tracks are very positives, and some are very dark.
Your melodies are very poor... when they are! Guitars seem always to play something going up and down. It's like if you play notes because "you must place some notes here".
You have to work a lot on your melodic structures, and exploit them!
Last remarks:
My post could seem to be very hard with you, but I reapeat: your work is very good, I've retrieve the spirit of Mike here, and I just saw that to help you to improve this job. I'm not able to build structures like yours, because I've too different musical influences to achieve that. That why I reapeat: congratulations!
I know you can improve it! Good work!
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