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Posted: May 19 2007, 13:26

Hi !

Music for me is an entertainment and I like very much to experiment with new sounds. I have composed this song with many arpegios, looking for the sensation of Incantantions: strings, flutes, piano... up&down in the scale.

MySpace Andy - Ojos de Luna Llena

Well, I´d like to know what do you think about it.

Thanks !!!

Regards,

Andy
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onion Offline




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Posted: May 19 2007, 14:54

Quote (Andy @ May 19 2007, 19:26)
Well, I´d like to know what do you think about it.

Actually, NO you don´t    :/

Mike


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Posted: May 22 2007, 19:15

The track is coming along nicely with some nice melodies

the only thing i can recommend is tighten the sounds so that it doesnt sound muddled up/timing

good luck with the songs


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Posted: May 22 2007, 19:31

Hi Andy, you are in the company of some really great musicians, so the standard is pretty high!

This is a neat melody, nice bass track, but needs some work. A little disjointed in places and not sure i like the vocals. I'm sure you will improve as you work more on these pieces.


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