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Posted: Nov. 08 2003, 16:09

Hey everyone,

I've been working on a new Opus. As yet unnamed. It's in its alpha stage at the moment, i wouldn't usually post it until it's finished. But since you guys are always so helpful giving me advice and constructive critiscism, i thought i'd see what you guys think of it.

The whole composition is a bit flat, weak and messy at the moment, but i think it has a lot of room for improvements. The mix isn't great either.

Anyways i'll stop yabbering, take a listen. It's quite low quility because i had to fit it on my geocities account which limits 5mb.


Opus Pt.1  [6:32]  [4.48mb]   (Right Click- Save Target As)

Cheers

:D

Johnny - Aka. Crises


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Posted: Nov. 09 2003, 16:46

gah 21 views and no-replys...comon people  :/

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Posted: Nov. 10 2003, 06:24

no worries matey ;)
I hope you still remember I liked it ;)


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Posted: Nov. 10 2003, 06:50

that guitar in the background sounds too hergest ridge alike but i like it. :) i would replace that electronic glockenspiel-like sound with something different. overall it is enjoyable, keep us updated. :)

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Posted: Nov. 10 2003, 07:08

I hate to make a the-link-isn't-working post, but the link really doesn't work.  (Yes, I did use the save-target-as function)
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Posted: Nov. 10 2003, 09:37

Kristof: I just tried and it works
so I am really sorry I gotta make a kristof-isn't-working post :D :P


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Posted: Nov. 10 2003, 12:07

With Geocities, you click on the link, and then you have to hit enter in the location bar again.

Can't listen now -- now Internet at home (just moved), and busy at the office. Grrrr...


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Posted: Nov. 12 2003, 08:20

Allright, I managed to download it. And this is great stuff! Nice guitar, little bells work well, good quality. Hergest Ridge like composition, it's simple, but it works. Especially the themes at 2:34 and 5:20.

I had to search very hard to find something I don't like.  :D I'd suggest to make a decrescendo at the end of the high bell-like theme you start at 2:51 and end at 3:01. I think that would add that little bit more emotion to the piece.

Nice job! I'm gonna listen to this more often!l :cool:


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Posted: Nov. 12 2003, 11:06

Thanks for the comments guys i appreciate it very much :)

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