Music, the ancient language...
Group: Musicians
Posts: 407
Joined: Jan. 2003 |
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Posted: June 01 2003, 13:56 |
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Agree with Brandon here. Seems to miss some body. Besides that, the only thing that bothers me is the lack of an ending. Make an ending!!
When I read Brandon's post while downloading it and saw the word 'chaotic', I already was very worried! But you kept it within the borders of sanity. No big composition sins.
I like the dolphin-like sound you produce. You surprised me in a good way this time!
Maybe if you keep making progess like this, I might one day be able to appreciate your style...
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