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Posted: June 08 2009, 03:53 |
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I'm sure you would rather have pure honesty than anything else. It reminded me of me when I got my first synth and I was excited but not quite focused. There were a couple of music theory problems, notes clashing. It had no real direction, also needed more complexity. Like a song has a part A, B, C, maybe even D. Like a structure A,B,A,B,C,A.....fadeout. Kind of like Genesis' ABACAB. Do a few more. Take the best parts, put them together. Plus the monophonic piano simplicity(the same fault with MO Light+Shade) is apparent. Use some staccato chords and clever tricks. You're on the right track tho. I'm just trying to tell you its like most of the fan tracks on here. Wanna be different? Make it more complex. Have fun,
Jim
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We raise our voices in the night
Crying to heaven
And will our voices be heard
Or will they break Like the wind
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