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Sir Mustapha Offline




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Posted: Jan. 22 2007, 12:32

"Stripy"

Yes, there's still plenty of work to be done. The mix needs tidying up (the chimes are way too loud), the quiet/loud dynamics need work, a few instruments are still yet to be recorded... Still, I believe that's the overall shape of the song. It's just a sneak preview of my next album, which is still on the works. Comments are welcome.


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Posted: Feb. 26 2007, 07:39

I hate to see tracks with 0 comments, so I'm listening to a few and posting some comments.

I like the chords and melodies, although without all of the instruments intact, a few bits sound like they've been going on too long.  I'm sure your other melody lines will address this.

About a third of the way through you have a rather odd chord played a few times in a row... it doesn't sound right at first, but the way it resolves is better.

What I particularly like is that while the track starts as a fairly simple tune it quickly develops into something that's original and unpredictable.

Style-wise it sounds like a videogame melody, a cross between Chrono Trigger (the chords) and Secret of Mana (the glockenspiel/chimes).

I'd certainly like to hear this once you've added to it.


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